Milton Glaser Layout

Sorry for not being able to blog for a few weeks. I've been busy with school, work and such. Anyways, I am making my first official graphic design project. My class is doing a magazine layout for an artist of our choosing and I'm doing Milton Glaser. Have you ever seen the "I LOVE NEW YORK" logo? That logo was made by him. He is such an amazing graphic design artist and am happy to be doing my project on him. Here's what I've done so far:

Feel free to comment on my work and give me suggestions on what can I do to improve my work if you have any. But please, no rude comments. I hope all of you like my work. Let's hope that the person interviewing me likes my work too. >_<